#1
Pardon me for having nobler things in mind
Than beer and pussy
But I can’t see a reason to drink this time
So just pass right through me

Cause what’s the point? We’re all stray pubes circling the drain
And the beer it keeps me insane, makes me forget I’ve nothing to gain
But I’ve got something
I’ve got something
I’ve got something
I’ve got

I’ve got a quarter and a couple one dollar bills
I’ve got a cure for everyone’s ills
I call it love
and money
I’ve got a voice that really isn’t that good
But it’s always done what it could
Made them hear me
Please just hear me
Shut up and ****ing hear me!

This ain’t no call for revolution
Just a problem and a solution
Put down your cups and raise up your fists
Scream through blood we’re not living like this
Anymore

I’m not a prophet so please don’t follow
I’m just a boy sick of drowning the sorrow
All I ask is that you reconsider
The life you lead, are you really a winner?
You’re not

So pardon me, for having nobler things in mind
Than beer and pussy
I want Super Saiyan abilities
#3
Quote by rebelmidget
Pardon me for having nobler things in mind
Than beer and pussy
But I can’t see a reason to drink this time
So just pass right through me
I like this part. the first two lines i was confused but the last two got me wanting to read more. so i did.
Cause what’s the point? We’re all stray pubes circling the drain
And the beer it keeps me insane, makes me forget I’ve nothing to gain
But I’ve got something
I’ve got something
I’ve got something
I’ve got
the imagery is awesome here. the only thing is instead of and the beer it keeps me insane, maybe the beer makes me sane...it seems to work with next part a little better sense-wise. i thought he would be insane while he knew he had nothing to gain then idk. maybe im rambling. anyways.
I’ve got a quarter and a couple one dollar bills
I’ve got a cure for everyone’s ills
I call it love
and money
I’ve got a voice that really isn’t that good
But it’s always done what it could
Made them hear me
Please just hear me
Shut up and ****ing hear me!
now thats what im talking about homes. i dig the shit out of this part. it rocks.
This ain’t no call for revolution
Just a problem and a solution
Put down your cups and raise up your fists
Scream through blood we’re not living like this
Anymore
at this point i got a melody stuck in my head for it. this one was even better than the last stanza. very good
I’m not a prophet so please don’t follow
I’m just a boy sick of drowning the sorrow
All I ask is that you reconsider
The life you lead, are you really a winner?
You’re not

So pardon me, for having nobler things in mind
Than beer and pussy


and it ends out solidly. overall pretty wicked piece i would say. not much else there is to say about it.

but if you would take a look at forever yesterday in my sig that would be awesome