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I've not posted here in a loong time but i thought i'd share this song with you. I've recorded and posted a version on youtube with a basic chord sequence. Its a love song that I wrote one afternoon this summer.. please let me know what you think.

Watch it here:-> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v9I2LWpyw7o

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You seemed to know me from the start,
you could read the lines across my heart,
we sat talking in that bar,
then afterwards beside your car,
The minutes turned to hours,
it all seemed like a dream,
I feel like i will wake up
and if you're not there i'll scream.


Chorus:
Our souls have become,
From two into one,
The light that lights the darkest day,
I've been so cold since you went away..


The days together went so fast,
I'd found the one to love at last,
You moved into my home and life,
I thought that you could be my wife,
The years just rolled on by,
we felt rich but we were poor,
We argued like no other,
Till you walked right out the door.


Chorus:
Our souls have become,
From two into one,
The light that lights the darkest day,
I've been so cold since you went away..


That was only days before,
I find i miss you more and more,
I'm staring where you used to lay,
hoping you won't stay away,
Oh baby i am sorry,
I didn't mean to make you cry,
I've regretted we didn't makeup,
I just want to curl up and die,


Chorus:
Our souls have become,
From two into one,
The light that lights the darkest day,
I've been so cold since you went away..


I hear your key turn in the door,
My heart skips beats of two or more,
You slowly walked back in the room,
hoping you didn't come back to soon,
My baby I'm so sorry,
Please don't leave me blind,
Lets think about tomorrow,
and leave our arguments behind.


Chorus:
Our souls have become,
From two into one,
The light that lights the darkest day,
I'm happy that you're back to stay.

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Please let me know your thoughts!
Jonno