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I attempted to write a song using my bass...though I just started playing bass and don't have much experience singing.

Any comments/critiques are greatly appreciated
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ey-eyyy, Are you a Scott Staph/Eddie Vedder/Anthony Kiedis impersonator?
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#3
the bass line great, just when i was starting to really like it, i heard the vocals, they sound really bad, the completly ruin the song, there still not as bad as mine when i started, there still not great but... you sould try using guitar pro if you don't already, its really great for compsing songs, it would also allow you to add oher instruments to complete the song,
i only play guitar, yet in my song theres piano bass drums strings etc... all using midi
but they sound pretty realistic.

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Gibson Les Paul Studio
Fender American Standard Stratocaster Sunburst
Line 6 Pod XT Live
Randall G3 Series 75w Amplifier
and Myself