when we were kids
they taught us to write
just to fill a page.
and when we grew up,
we could paint the sistine brighter
with colored paper and safety scissors.
if you have nothing to say, then don't say it at all.
Good message, bad flow
Freedom isn't free...

It costs like ten dollars a gram
i like it but for such a short piece like this i think u really need some spectacular images/language to really pack a punch and deliver the message properly.overall its pretty good but i feel u either need to make it longer or improve the language


Tell me what nation on this earth, was not born of tragedy-Primordial