#1
when we were kids
they taught us to write
just to fill a page.
and when we grew up,
we could paint the sistine brighter
with colored paper and safety scissors.
if you have nothing to say, then don't say it at all.
#2
Good message, bad flow
Freedom isn't free...


It costs like ten dollars a gram
#3
i like it but for such a short piece like this i think u really need some spectacular images/language to really pack a punch and deliver the message properly.overall its pretty good but i feel u either need to make it longer or improve the language

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1220748
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