well this my song tell me what you think any tips would be nice

Intro We try to find who we are
Why is it so hard
To find are selves out of the crowd
I just want to scream out loud

Chorus I cant tell you who you are
Find your self lets get in the car
Will go so far away from here
And wait for the day
That will hold so deer

Verse We look for truth
But we cant begin to see
What this worlds
Become to be
So ask yourself
If your ready to leave
Don’t look back
Will you come with me (Chorus)

Bridge We fight for what is right
But who are we to say
I sit right here wondering
Why am I losing my day (Chorus 2 )