#1
it would be better if I didn't have to remind you
how to behave
or to shave
before you leave to get the bus

and I'd like to be sat beside you today
when you get your hair cut
so I could bagsy the first compliment

da-da-da-da-da-da-da da-da dum
da-da, da-da-da

remember when we got them two straws
for the lemonade
both red ones
we joked we'd licked each other's tongues

and then we watched all the people pass by us like
leaves on the wind
how you blew me away
with the end

and I'd like to be sat beside you today
when you get your hair cut
I could get in the first compliment

da-da-da-da-da-da-da da-da dum
da-da, da-da
da-da-da-da-da-da-da da-da dum
da-da, da-da-da

she slouched and slumped her shoulder
I'd already told her
the end is nothing like the start

it would be better if I didn't have to remind you
how to behave
so get your hair cut today
I'll see you round the block

da-da-da-da-da-da-da da-da dum
da-da, da-da
da-da-da-da-da-da-da da-da dum
da-da, da-da-da
#2
wonderfully enjoyable.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!
#3
I really liked this. I could see it being a soft acoustic song if that's what you wanted it to be. My favorite part was the first two paragraphs, they were somewhat casual with a sort of humor behind it that I can't seem to put my finger on. I don't know what else to say but nice work.

If you could take a look at mine that would be fantastic. Thanks

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1223635
#4
enjoyable indeed. Nothing that I'll remember in a few days but add some poppish music and that might just be one of those alternative hits I listened smiling like crazy going home from school after finally talking to this wonderful girl I've been looking at for months back in ninth grade.

this smells of good times.