loved the tapping part at the beggining man!
if you carried on the chugga chug part at the start whilst another guitarist played the tapping part it would sound lush!!

i see you like TBDM and your t-shirt suggests you like as i lay dying? lol
both great bands!
your riffs reflect your inspiration for those bands

keep it up fella!!
get drums to it an that, get another guitar track wrote and it'll be cush! :p

crit mine if u fancy?
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"I am Osiris" at 2.22 i like how it goes "BA-BA-BA-BA---Ba-Ba-Ba-Ba---BA-BA--Ba-Ba-

its badass.

I wouldn't call that a song so much as a collection of riffs. There really is no structure or flow to it, just the riffs. Not that that's a bad thing, the riffs are definately killer, but there's alot missing, obviously. Having good riffs is one thing, but using them well within the context of a song, that's another step up.
Not trying to bash, just trying to encourage you to take the next step and record a full song

crit back?