champayne
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#1
This is something I've been writing for the past 2 days. It's mostly me just coming up with random shit on my guitar, perfecting it, and putting it into GP and writing bass and drums to fit. I am not following any scales, just playing random hammer-on's in order to attempt to sound cool. This is by no means finished or perfect, I'm just trying to get an honest opinion. C4C as usual.
Attachments:
untitledtechthing.zip
Quote by RhyseOrtiz
Banned because.. that was brilliant, champayne


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Last edited by champayne at Jun 9, 2010,
xbitmetal
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Join date: Aug 2009
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#2
Awesome work, can hear influence from necrophagist ! You have done great work till now, but solo might be difficult to sound awesome.

Part A - totally necrophagist! Reminds me of epitaph - 5/5.
Part B - a little bit too noisy. Too high notes. 2/5.
Part C - Harmonics were a little bit dull. 3/5.
Part D - there were a bit stupid notes, but overall good. 4/5.
Part E - Awesome work. Melodic and brutal! Last two bars sounded like children of bodom.
champayne
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#3
Thanks for the crit. Ya I can imagine the solo being a little bit difficult, I might break the song down and make it slow-ish. I critted the Contradiction Evidence piece.
Quote by RhyseOrtiz
Banned because.. that was brilliant, champayne


Some of My Recent Songs

[thread="1403441"]Synthetic Damage WIP[/thread]

[thread="1350364"]The Nightman Awakens[/thread]

[thread="1322579"]Into the Sunset WIP[/thread]

[thread="1296556"]Frost[/thread]
[thread="1247340"]The Butter Knife Massacre[/thread]
[thread="1253933"]Into The Sparta Pit[/thread]

[thread="1224038"]Untitled Tech Thing[/thread]
champayne
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#5
Aw man, that's awesome ultrasonic. Shit, If you would have showed me that sooner, i already started writing after that. I know I will put those 2 riffs in there somewhere. I might extend my solo with that too. Thanks man.
Quote by RhyseOrtiz
Banned because.. that was brilliant, champayne


Some of My Recent Songs

[thread="1403441"]Synthetic Damage WIP[/thread]

[thread="1350364"]The Nightman Awakens[/thread]

[thread="1322579"]Into the Sunset WIP[/thread]

[thread="1296556"]Frost[/thread]
[thread="1247340"]The Butter Knife Massacre[/thread]
[thread="1253933"]Into The Sparta Pit[/thread]

[thread="1224038"]Untitled Tech Thing[/thread]
ultrasonic
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Join date: Apr 2008
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#6
Quote by champayne
Aw man, that's awesome ultrasonic. Shit, If you would have showed me that sooner, i already started writing after that. I know I will put those 2 riffs in there somewhere. I might extend my solo with that too. Thanks man.


Thanks Im adding more as we speak, I think i used one of your riffs again somewhere amongst it, but so far it sounds okes

Ill post again once Ive added more

I can really see this being a song

Edit: Done, I finished it, sorta lol I added a nice Clean Section complete with a solo, which took ages for me to get to agree with the guitar behind it I hope you like
Attachments:
Full Song.gp5
Last edited by ultrasonic at Nov 1, 2009,
champayne
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#7
Hah. Wow man, you can have the song lol.
Quote by RhyseOrtiz
Banned because.. that was brilliant, champayne


Some of My Recent Songs

[thread="1403441"]Synthetic Damage WIP[/thread]

[thread="1350364"]The Nightman Awakens[/thread]

[thread="1322579"]Into the Sunset WIP[/thread]

[thread="1296556"]Frost[/thread]
[thread="1247340"]The Butter Knife Massacre[/thread]
[thread="1253933"]Into The Sparta Pit[/thread]

[thread="1224038"]Untitled Tech Thing[/thread]
xbitmetal
Registered User
Join date: Aug 2009
289 IQ
#8
Quote by ultrasonic
Thanks Im adding more as we speak, I think i used one of your riffs again somewhere amongst it, but so far it sounds okes

Ill post again once Ive added more

I can really see this being a song

Edit: Done, I finished it, sorta lol I added a nice Clean Section complete with a solo, which took ages for me to get to agree with the guitar behind it I hope you like


Post gp4 file plz xDD?