Not really my kind of music, but it sounded fine to me. I liked your "Forsaken" song quite a bit too.
The sound quality was bad but I liked the song. Kind of reminds me of dark tranquility
riffs sound pretty solid man! i like em! (Y)
used to have a track that i made that sounded a bit like the start of your riff
yours is mucho better though aha!

only thing i can say is tighten up on the playing and it'll be stop on yeah?
try add to it though, i'll be wanna see what it sounds like as a full length song!


have a listen to that if u fancy some crit?
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"I am Osiris" at 2.22 i like how it goes "BA-BA-BA-BA---Ba-Ba-Ba-Ba---BA-BA--Ba-Ba-

its badass.