I liked it. Not gonna comment on anything quality related, obviously that wasn't the focus of what you were doing. The song had a nice structure. I like all of the different sections you had, they all fit together nicely. Nice playing technique, it was great to listen to. Overall, I want to hear it in a full band arrangement to really critique it. But great job!

Crit mine?

Damn man that was awesome. Seriously, I can hardly think of anything that could be improved, apart from the sound quality of course. This could seriously become a very successful song, in my opinion

sorry if this message wasn't very constructive haha