im not looking for 'oh mann what are the chords you used at 1:25' i want constructive criticism on the quality of my recording , please dont mention the overall volume of the track i know it's low.

the song is on my profile

cheers guys

NOTE: forgot to add the song is at the bottom with the appropriate title 'song that needs criticism'
Last edited by professorlamp at Nov 1, 2009,
The guitars could be lightly louder with maybe a tad more midrange. The sound's a tiny bit tinny. Otherwise its good. Not my kind of music though so my opinion is probably not what you are after
Distorted guitars sound pretty thin, you should try doubling/hard panning them. Also your timing is rather sloppy overall.