#1
tantric mind-meld
anti-depressants expelled
hero of an era
propelled by anxiety
hero of an era
a slut for sobriety
manners
a column about my poetry
serious and solemn
with care and
dignity
three syllables of formality
a storm of words
brief statements of
humanity
sweet drunken sex
logic in the eyes of those that write
a stream of consciousness
words that
rhyme
love divided by
drunkards that
piss in the street.
#3
Really good to see you post again. I usually hate when punctuation is not utilised to aid a piece, but this was done very well. I loved the line breaks and the rhythm that it gave the piece, the beat it created as I read along. It was almost equivalent to a heartbeat.
So in this case the structure did enough to match this piece and highlight its meaning. I really liked it.
It felt very natural and unassuming, honest and though almost matter-of-factly, it simply works.

I really enjoyed reading this.
This is not a pipe
#4
This is legendary.
マリ「しあわっせはーあるいってこないだーからあるいってゆっくんだねーん 
いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ
 さーんぽすすんでにっほさっがるー 
じーんせいはっわんつー!ぱんち・・・


"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching

#6
c'est pas mal. c'est pas *absolument* magnificant, mais, c'est pas mal.

edit: ****. I just realised that that was in French.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!