#1
I just wrote this today. I've been sick with the flu for about a month now, but it's recently gotten alot worse. This just explains my feelings of this sickness.

This felt weird for me writing this, because I usually don't write straightup poems. It felt good writing something other than an actual song.


I CRY MYSELF TO SLEEP AT NIGHT
OVER THE THOUGHT OF WAKING UP DEAD
THIS HYPERBOLE OF THE FLU
BOTH OF YOU COME DOWN THE STAIRS
YELLING, SCREAMING
I JUST WANT SOME PEACE, I JUST WANT TO HEAL.

IN A PLACE LIKE THIS THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE
SO YOU ALL CAN GO TO HELL
WHAT I WOULD DO TO BE SOMEWHERE ELSE
IN A DIFFERENT TIME, IN A DIFFERENT PLACE
THAT'S WHERE I WANT TO BE.

I WANT TO WAKE UP IN NEW YORK
I WANT TO WAKE UP IN ORLANDO
I WANT TO WAKE UP IN SEATTLE
WHAT I WOULD GIVE TO BE SOMEONE ELSE
JUST TO FEEL BETTER AGAIN
THINGS NEED TO CHANGE

F*** YOU, H1N1. F*** YOU.
Last edited by iplaythefish at Nov 1, 2009,
#2
I feel the same when I'm sick. Really, there's nothing terribly groundbreaking or mesmerizing in the writing, but your subject matter and the way you are so real about it makes up for it. I'd recommend just revising and editing for a while
#3
lol nice.,..

my opinion on hn1n.. over rated by EVERYONE.. they all complain there gunna die when they get in.. when in relality.. all it is, is the flu.. just a lill worse and lasts a few days longer
#5
Quote by #1 synth
i ****ing love songs that are all in caps.

Haha. It's a habit when I type in notepad.

@Hippie and Metal
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