Could anyone comment on my harmonized metal riff, anything about the tone is also welcome. Its my first attempt at harmonizing so be gentle

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The riff itself sounds good, pertty good harmonzing. As for your tone, it sounds very hollow, like you scooped your mids, or even your tremble, mabey both idk. You should add more mids and highs to it so your tone becomes more punchy, instead of hollow.