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This is definitely a rough draft, I made most of it like a year ago and I just figured out some good guitar pieces for it so I'm gonna try and write some more and make it work. Any Ideas are great cuz this isn't based off of reality so I'm still trying to figure out if I wanna do 3rd person or if it's all about me talking to myself. So yea, random ideas and twists appreciated.


Driving Under Your Influence


Verse -
Safe and sound in the arms of money
He holds himself
A false hope has brought him up
And now it's bringing him down

Lost in excitement
Killing and crashing spree's
Red Adrenaline surging
Blind drunk and violent needs

Bridge -
Disorientating sensation
collapsing in collision
door creaked right open
And he's descending with your permission


Chorus -
He was driving under your influence
Don't try and hide it, Your the one to blame for this

Tag -
D.O.A.
Theirs nothing left to say
Other than another drunk driver
Next to the million others today.
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Quote by WarriorKlan

D.O.A.
Theirs nothing left to say
Other than another drunk driver
Next to the million others today.


I like this idea. When one usually thinks about drunk driving they usually think about alcohol and a car but the idea can mean so much more.

A metaphor for life.

A man drunk on greed driving to his end

Sounds like America
Turn Off Your Mind, Relax And Float Downstream

...and if you don't know where your going, any road will take you there