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Here is the revised version of a song I already posted here. This is the first song I have taken some extensive time in trying to fix, unlike the others that I don't even give the time of day to perfect when I write them. Anyway here it is.

My life was a sacrifice.
All they did was roll the dice.
Laying in the darkness filled with cries
Remembering all those little lies.

The things I do, this life I choose
Makes me happy win or lose.
Can't remember what I've done
Now I surely will be shun.

Oh now I cannot wait,
To see what becomes my fate.
I just cannot change my past,
But those memories they will last.

You see the things I do, this life I choose
Makes me happy win or lose.
I have hurt myself today
Dwelling on a life of pain.

Tried to leave that life behind,
But memories burnt in my mind.
Sorrow and agony fueled the fire,
Of my life lived as a liar.
Pride takes place of my fears.
Now I can hold back my tears.

But the things I do, this life I choose
Makes me happy win or lose.
Finally remember what I've done
And now I think that I have won.
But what it is and what it was
Doesn't matter I rose above.
Last edited by mdm1993 at Nov 5, 2009,