#1
hi, here is a song i wrote a while ago and now i finished composing it with the piano!

would love some criticism, and please i know i cant sing so don't bother criticize everything else except my singing cause i cant find a suitable singer

" The moment i saw you i knew,
You are all that is right and what is true,
and you showed me the way,
and you taught me not to stray,
and for that I'm grateful everyday.

the moment you boarded the plane,
You can call me insane,
but i knew that
i never gonna see you
i never gonna see you again.

though now i see,
you did it for me and for the sake of our lives.

please come back..."

if you wanna watch me preform it, hope you'll enjoy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I9IOBNmphtY

R.g
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#3
thanks means a lot to me ! happy that you enjoyed listening !
Mother****3r!!!! D0nT u l!m!t ur

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Metaldream!!!!!!!