#1
still playing around with this one, i want to add more layers in pieces to add more depth, but still contemplating the right move.

the only thing that really bugs me right now is the repetitive piano (should spend more time on that) and guitar harmonies comprised of only octave.

let me know what you think.
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Tantalize (BETA version).gp5
#2
i really enjoyed that. the only thing i can say is that you can do a lot more with that melody than you've done. you can move it around a lot more, change keys. i also think it needs some sort of percussion part. not overpowering, by any means, but something light. it's also less easy listening, and more movie soundtrack, i'd say. mostly because of the very present theme.

I just want to sleep forever.