#1
Like it? Hate it? Technical death metal from depths of hell. This song is about hate and massacre. Technical piece, inspired by necrophagist. Has also little bit trash influence, 4 solos and an acoustic part.
Attachments:
Hate Carnage.gp4
Last edited by xbitmetal at Nov 7, 2009,
#2
hey man i think think you may have forgotten to post the song unless i'm just out of it
#3
Quote by Nergal22691
hey man i think think you may have forgotten to post the song unless i'm just out of it


Yeah fixed, my bad .
#4
i sense half/whole / diminished?


and I have some pretty good ideas bout a solo section, but I guess that you didn't tab that far yet?
Quote by Demonikk
'Practice amp' = amp you practice with? In my case, Peavey 6505+ and 4x12
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#6
Solo is a real problem for me.. I thought about some blues - like start since can't get anything else to start it. Anything I try sounds bad, I have no idea why .
Thanks for crit
#7
sounds awesome so far, but where do you want the solo?
Quote by Demonikk
'Practice amp' = amp you practice with? In my case, Peavey 6505+ and 4x12
I don't do things small


Except children.
#9
ahh i see it.... I'll attempt something tomorrow ,dead tired xD
Quote by Demonikk
'Practice amp' = amp you practice with? In my case, Peavey 6505+ and 4x12
I don't do things small


Except children.
#10
Sounded Brutal and awesome. Here's my go at the solo.
Attachments:
Solo.gp5
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
#12
There you go.
Attachments:
Solo.gp4
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
#13
Pretty nice shot! Needs little bit something more, thanks very much really !
If someone else has ideas for solo feel free to post too !
Last edited by xbitmetal at Nov 3, 2009,
#15
i think you should add a bit more variation, especially in the verses. it gets repetetive after a while. work on maybe some more interesting rhythms as well, because the straight 8ths start to get a bit annoying. i don't know. it wasn't bad, but it got slightly boring as it progressed.

I just want to sleep forever.


#16
I thought about it. Got to add some nice kicks there and there. I've planned to place around 4 solos, acoustic break and whole new break riff.
#17
BuMP! - The song is ready now.

And sorry for bump
Last edited by xbitmetal at Nov 7, 2009,
#18
Woah...

Well, to start off I'm gonna say I'm rarely impressed with tech death. I find the whole genre to be unnecessarily wanky and it's just boring.

I did however, really like the chorus riff and the break at 135 and 164.

Sorry it's such a crappy crit, but I thought it would be more rude to ignore your request than to write this.

Also, do you mind heading back to my thread? Your crit was terribly vague.
#19
I think it's pretty good but the main riff sounds like a practice pattern. Maybe some variation and a few string skipping and some chords thrown in would do the trick?

Very necrophagisty. I see you've put effort in it. I liked it.

I would take off the solo from the jazzy part.

8½/10


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