Cool bluesy vibe going on in this song. Were you playing to a click track? I think it would help out, the rhythm could be tightened up a bit. During the outro, it would be nice to have some kind of rhythm track going, even just a muted rhythm or something. A clean electric guitar with a bit of reverb would work wonders.
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nah, i wasnt playing to a click. lol, you can deff tell. the outro i just didnt have anything else so kept adding random parts. what did you guys think of the riff at 0:47 that comes right after the strumy stuff? is that already a riff?