#1
My band and me actually are still working on this song..
it's not the final version..
please tell me, if something is totally crap or could be improved.
thanks.
there's still no bass track, sorry.

c4c, leave a link.
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Last edited by Nemesis@Germany at Nov 4, 2009,
#2
It's good the drum track could be improved a bit and the riffs could transition better and be a bit more cohesive but overall there are a lot of good ideas in there. It reminds me a lot of Meshuggah. Good stuff just keep working on it 7.5/10 for what you have so far
Crit My Symphonic Black Metal Song? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1225362
P.S. on that thread there is the original version and then a revised on, check them both out if you wouldn't mind and let me know which you prefer.