#1
Hi,

This is a new song i am working on,
made it fast and looped the guitar parts
so it isn't that clean and some things are not perfect in time
but i would like some feedback before i go work on it more.
Never asked for feedback before, so i'm curious...

I'd like to crit your stuff too!

It's in my profile; Fbbfgdgeacsm (just the chord names written without spaces)

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/oxokoning/
#2
i'd say its a good idea. i like the second half when it speeds up. the beginning to me is a little repetitive maybe switch up the picking a little, or throw some delay/reverb on it. just a thought
#4
yeah i'm gonna make the beginning shorter and more interesting

Thanks for the Feedback!!!!
#5
Quote by cainmd
i'd say its a good idea. i like the second half when it speeds up. the beginning to me is a little repetitive maybe switch up the picking a little, or throw some delay/reverb on it. just a thought


I agree......two minutes of the same clean progression is a little long and repetative.
You should change up the progression too. Even during the heavier, fuller part latter in the piece....it sounds like the same basic chord progression.

I think you're on to something......it sounds good, you just need to build it up more.
#6
Its not bad, it is a good idea like everybody else has said, but it almost became like a clock ticking, you know, it got annoying after two minutes of the exact same progression. Try and not loop your tracks, try to play them the whole time, so you can change it up and not sound off time. But you also might want to work on your transistions, even though I suspect that the clean track was looped, the transistions from chord to chord where a bit slow. But, even that being said, you have a good idea here, I would keep playing around with it till you get something you like, then record it.

Crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22202686#post22202686