#1
I wrote this on the spot, and I think it's pretty decent.

[Verse]
I think I'll stay home today
don't feel like going out
I'll close my blinds & kill my time
nobody will come looking for me here

[Chorus]
I don't want to stay here any longer
I don't want to stay here any longer
I don't want to stay here any longer
I don't want to catch your disease

[Verse]
Nobody came looking for me today
going up & coming down
I'm the talk of the town

[Chorus]
I don't want to stay here any longer
I don't want to stay here any longer
I don't want to stay here any longer
I don't want to catch your disease
#2
Congrats on your first song. It's a tad generic but then everybody's first song is and this is in my opinion better than an average first song. Not even my type of music and I think its nice. The part about catching a disease made me lol
If you want to check out my latest song its few threads down and its called the Necromancer. It's a tad...um darker then yours lol but if you want just give it a quick comment
#3
Thanks. I'd been hit with inspiration from Nirvana, Pixies, and Elliott Smith at the time of writing. lol
#4
Please check the S&L forum rules. You can't have (My first song) in the title. You can post it again later with just the title.

I can see you're new here welcome!

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