#1
i don't believe in regrets
i've always said
that you can learn a lot from your mistakes
and I thought that it would be for the best
if we parted ways

I don't believe in love
maybe because we're young
and both of us just want to keep having fun
but to tell you the truth
i still miss you
and i don't think this is a phase that I'm going through

I don't believe in an afterlife
so this is it
make the best of the good and the bad
i do believe in heaven and hell though
but it exists only when i'm here with you

but where are you now?
i don't believe
i don't believe in anything

i've never felt so nervous
i've never felt so excited
i've never felt so confused and torn
i've never felt so special
i've never felt so overwhelmed, loved and scorned
i've never felt my heart break into two
I've never felt this way about anyone but you
i've never felt my heart break into two
but then again i've never felt so happy before i met you
#2
ummm... *Clap*.... a little blunt and almost too straight forward... unless you're going for an 80's Hardcore Punk or Thrash Metal kind of deal...
#3
This was a good effort. It feels a bit too wordy though, for the amount of information its carrying.Maybe try choosing your words a little more carefully rather than just throwing a whole sentence in.


Quote by Kruptos

i do believe in heaven and hell though
but it exists only when i'm here with you

This part turned me off. Way too cliche to have any real meaning.


Quote by Kruptos

i've never felt so nervous
i've never felt so excited
i've never felt so confused and torn
i've never felt so special
i've never felt so overwhelmed, loved and scorned
i've never felt my heart break into two
I've never felt this way about anyone but you
i've never felt my heart break into two
but then again i've never felt so happy before i met you

I really like this part. It gets a great momentum going and works well.
#5
i don't believe in regrets
i've always said
that you can learn a lot from your mistakes
and I thought that it would be for the best
if we parted ways

Great intro I think! It flows easy

I don't believe in love
maybe because we're young
and both of us just want to keep having fun
but to tell you the truth
i still miss you
and i don't think this is a phase that I'm going through

Again, the flow just works. You explain alot with little words, I'm diggin it.

I don't believe in an afterlife
so this is it
make the best of the good and the bad
i do believe in heaven and hell though
but it exists only when i'm here with you

The last two lines don't flow very well to me. I can see the point your trying to make... You don't believe in god, but you believe in a heaven and hell with her, but heaven and hell being emotions of the definitions, and not an actual place. Clever, but you can word this better.

but where are you now?
i don't believe
i don't believe in anything

i've never felt so nervous
i've never felt so excited
i've never felt so confused and torn
i've never felt so special
i've never felt so overwhelmed, loved and scorned
i've never felt my heart break into two
I've never felt this way about anyone but you
i've never felt my heart break into two
but then again i've never felt so happy before i met you


The rest of the song goes a little too melodramatic for me. I like the ending (last line), where it's the contrast of the beginning, but the i've never felt gets old. Idk how you sing it but maybe you could cut some out by just doing...

i've never felt so nervous,
so excited
i've never felt so confused and torn,
so special
i've never felt so overwhelmed, loved and scorned

Good piece.