#1
theres something wrong inside this cage
this dellusionated, insomic rage
's got me hanging by my throat
inside this this cage, this cage

i speak, but no body hears and
my cries, theyre just oblivious to
this world, as it plays with torment in
my brain, and im stuck in this thing called
my maze

a new day to mark the party
that ive let loose from my heart
drink all the grog i want
and ignore all who try to stop
(ditch this or what? ^)

the bullshit system has me by its claws
and i can't make it out through its ever-ending
jaws!
so ill curl up in a ball
and pray to god for a new swarm

i speak, but no body hears and
my cries, theyre just oblivious to
this world, as it plays with torment in
my brain, and im stuck in this thing called
my self inflincted, hazardous maze




just so i feel better about myself im saying i failed at lyrics so you get the idea. i dont need your sympathy.

you gotta yell it btw., slooowly
Last edited by ~Moby Dick~ at Nov 9, 2009,
#2
i like it.. its pretty emotionally strong.. i would keep the "and ignore all who try to stop" line.. i think it fits well.. good job!