#1
Hi guys, heres my first mix of a new tune called 'in circles' All critiques encouraged!



Walking, Im walking through the sand and rain
My Blood just rifles through my veins
Kicking through these winter days

Im so tired,
I been running round in circles once again
I been wishing things that I just cant explain
Kicking through these winter days

Let me in,
I am covering in rain
Let me in
I will never go back again

Crawling, Crawling through this hurricane
My blood is gushing through my veins
Just kicking through these winter days

Im so tired,
I been running round in circles once again
I been seeing things that I just cant explain
Kicking through these winter days

Let me in,
I am covering in rain
Let me in
I will never go back again
Let me in,
I am covering in rain
Let me in
I will never go back again
#2
That was a nice song. I think it's let down by the odd mix though, it sounds almost like you had a boom box playing the backing track while you recorded the vocal. Basically you need everything to be more upfront except the vocal. And, don't hate me for this, it reminds me a little of the ballads that Enrique Iglesias has recorded (especially right where it goes to the line I'm so tired...).
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#3
I might have to hate you just a little for that!!! No I think your right I'm having real trouble mixing it, I think I've over processed it. I've changed a couple of things now i dont know if its made it any better though.