#2
really good song. measure 22, cool riff

maybe make it a bit longer, few more riffs. otherwise, awesome song
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Last edited by TechMetal at Nov 9, 2009,
#4
we are thinking to make it more longer, we need first make more longer the lyrics..
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#5
do a couple more riffs, then make a few more vocal verses and add them in, or just extend the ones you have
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#7
Quote by CarlosAlejandro
we are thinking to make it more longer, we need first make more longer the lyrics..


More longer? Seriously?

I think the song was pretty good, although it was EXTREMELY generic, but as long as you're fine with that I wont see it as a flaw. I know I've heard the chugging in bar 11 and 12 some where before, I mean the same EXACT rhythm, so you might consider changing it up. Pretty good stuff.
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#8
The fourths sound atrocious. Just go with thirds, please. Your already generic enough, why try to make it sound interesting by adding that ugly harmony?

EDIT: Here, made some changes.
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The opossition wants to kill me.gp5
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Last edited by AngrySockMonkey at Nov 11, 2009,