I've written my first song, as crappy as it is, and I have a question about rhyming. I know it's terrible, but this is the pattern



The question I have is; for the bridge, is it ok to go AABCCD, or will the D just sound out of place?

Thanks for any help
Last edited by CrashLove at Nov 10, 2009,
Well, the problem is your problem is very vague. Write it, sing it, share it, if it sounds out of place sometimes a little 'out of place' adds artistic flair to your work. If you wrote it and you feel it's really from the heart, it'll probaby be a great piece.

Write the song and post it here, or at least give us the bridge. A's, B's, C's and D's are hard to work with =/
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The end of the bridge is a perfect place to let a non-rhymed word hang. It can be used to build tension before you jump back into the last chorus. Of course it depends what the music is doing to some extent.

I agree..............It should fit,