#3
Lmao. Thats really good, perfect american song. The lyrics are really great, not too much to crit on them. The guitar could come through the mix a bit more, it was a bit quiet. I think you should just add a bass guitar in there, just to give it some more dynamics.

Thanks for the crit buddy.
#4
Thanks for checking out my song. I really enjoyed this, real nice and easy going. Like everyone else said, the guitar could be brought out a little more. Sounds great, nice melody. Good work
#5
Loved the lyrics!! I think you could throw in a few variations on the phrase endings for the verse, it gets a little too repetitive. This is the kind of tune that really needs as proper country treatment. Any plans to get an arrangement together for this?
"If money is the root of all evil, I'd like to be a bad, bad man."

- Huey Lewis & the News
#7
Well not really my genre, but I liked it quite a bit, nice melodies, and the background vocals are really well done. I would really suggest to increase the guitar levels quite a bit, at first when I started listening to it with low volume I thought it had no guitar.
Other than that nice work!

Thanks for the crit btw !