Nice feel, but I miss it sorta building to an explosion, which i think it could use
but great work
the piano has a nice sort of urgency to it, i dont really like the tone of the synth?) that comes in at 01:17 but i like what it is playing.
overall good work!

Check mine?
pretty impressive, what piano simulator are you using there?

like freth, i think that the synth comes off a bit harsh but if you were to eq it to smoothen it out a bit, then it would sound brilliant (i love that kinda stuff).

it does cut off very suddenly, but I guess as an intro track, it's supposed to do that?

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1230023 would be very grateful!