#1
Verse:
I saw it yesterday like an angel in disguise
It came to me and prayed like a devil caught in lies
Showed me what it means to love and not be seen
But then it went away but left me unafraid

1st Chorus:
I see the colors fade
Into a distant shade of gray
Beyond the horizon I wait
To start anew the day

Verse:
Blushing but unashamed just like the rising sun
More like an old flame that burns just like a new one
This better side of sight was never meant for me
But now that it's in my eyes, how did I ever see?

2nd Chorus:
I watch the masquerade
'tween words I said and those I'll never say
Beyond the horizon they wait
To try and speak again

3rd Chorus:
I see the colors fade
Through opened eyes and parting ways
Beyond the horizon I wait
To start anew the day
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Forgive them Father, they know not what they do.
#3
Quote by The Fret-Dancer
Verse:
I saw it yesterday like an angel in disguise
It came to me and prayed like a devil caught in lies
Showed me what it means to love and not be seen
But then it went away but left me unafraid
A nice start; I like it.

1st Chorus:
I see the colors fade
Into a distant shade of gray
Beyond the horizon I wait
To start anew the day
Not bad.

Verse:
Blushing but unashamed just like the rising sun
More like an old flame that burns just like a new one
This better side of sight was never meant for me
But now that it's in my eyes, how did I ever see?
I love this, especially the first two lines. Kudos.

2nd Chorus:
I watch the masquerade
'tween words I said and those I'll never say
Beyond the horizon they wait
To try and speak again
Pretty good.

3rd Chorus:
I see the colors fade
Through opened eyes and parting ways
Beyond the horizon I wait
To start anew the day
I like how this references the first chorus.
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Overall, I think it's great.

C4C? The link is in my sig.