#1
I break, We fight, You lie, I strike
You, cry, I regret, We kiss, I forget
You repeat and I see you're no better than before
I hurt, I surrender, I wait by the door

I can't help but forgive
Forgive and forget
You promise "Never again"
When does "never" end?

Sleep, Eat, Fight, Repeat
Sleep, Eat, Fight, Repeat
Cheat, Drink, Cry, Repeat
Sleep, Eat, Fight, Repeat

A relationship built of old photgraphs
Like a house of cards built over a knife
You huff and you puff and you blow the house down
I'm left in the cold...my photo album gone

Sleep, Eat, Fight, Repeat
Sleep, Eat, Fight, Repeat
Sleep, Eat, Fight, Repeat
Repeat
Repeat
Repeat
Sleep

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#2
The part that starts with "A relationship" is pretty good. The rest is okay, it just seems a bit too familiar; it's kind of cliche.
#4
I agree with D&DLover, the "A relationship built..." stanza is awesome. I really liked the 'house of cards over a knife' simile you threw in there. Cliche it may be, but it is well written, and there's nothing wrong with that.
Forgive them Father, they know not what they do.