#1
this song was created with guitar rig 3 and ez drummer the ideas where generated by me and my rythem guitarist the week before then i put it together to see what it would sound like at home

hope you like it its not finished its just the intro and verse

please give feedback good or bad
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/xXCRA1GXx/music/all/play734300

the song you are looking for is called BAND SONG IDEA
This is a MotherFxcking Invatation
#2
The way its written I see no problems with. The rhythm playing is really tight, and the riffs are pretty cool. However, I'd try and sort out that guitar tone, it sounds real buzzy at the moment (although I'm no expert at using Guitar Rig so I'm afraid I can't help you out there).

Keep working on it though!

If you could crit my song here, that would be great! (the updated track is further down the page) https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22299807

cheers!