#2
I really like it. To me it sounds a little bit like Arsis.
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#3
Loved the tapped intro. 12-19 was good, but I think you could use a more epic sounding progression that resolves better. The section at 20 is just great. Can't find anything I dont like about it. Fantastic solo at 37. I think bar 53 is utterly useless and distracts from the song. I cut it and listened again and it sounded just fine going right into the triplet section. You must be a real beat if you can play that string skipping part. I love the solo starting at 61, but it was way too abrupt. That part really needs a smooth transition. Again if you can play this sliding part at the end that's amazing, man. Now, as much as I love this piece, I think the ending is just garbage. The last bar sounds dreadful and it's a terrible ending. Judging from the rest of it, you can do much better.

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#4
very nice, I especially liked the clean part that started at bar 62. Cool chords, nice tapping. I really enjoyed it.
#5
Quote by StewieSwan
Loved the tapped intro. 12-19 was good, but I think you could use a more epic sounding progression that resolves better. The section at 20 is just great. Can't find anything I dont like about it. Fantastic solo at 37. I think bar 53 is utterly useless and distracts from the song. I cut it and listened again and it sounded just fine going right into the triplet section. You must be a real beat if you can play that string skipping part. I love the solo starting at 61, but it was way too abrupt. That part really needs a smooth transition. Again if you can play this sliding part at the end that's amazing, man. Now, as much as I love this piece, I think the ending is just garbage. The last bar sounds dreadful and it's a terrible ending. Judging from the rest of it, you can do much better.

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