#1
I was listening to an old track of mine, and it had a very heavy vibe to it, so I wanted to make a track that was heavy and hit real hard. I had some mixing issues with the bridge, so dont freak out at that part.

What should I change? Does it need lead?

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#2
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What should I change?


You should play the riffs in time. These kinds of riffs demand an absolute dedication to the groove. The timing mistakes you have makes the listener lose the groove which is so important.

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Does it need lead?


No, the rhythm needs to be solid as rock before you even consider putting a lead on there. I've said it before: practice, practice, practice.

Odd how that one cymbal hit almost sounds like someone exhaling...
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