#1
alli-cat

SORRY LITTLE GIRL STUCK INSIDE A NET
STUCK INSIDE A NET, LOVE IS LIKE A NET
LOVE IS LIKE A NET,
EVERY DAY TOGETHER WE JUST SLEPT
WE JUST SLEPT LIKE FLIES IN A SPIDER WEB
SPIDER WEB, WAITING TO BE EATEN
WAITING FOR THE MOUTH
WAITING FOR A GIANT MOUTH TO BITE ON BOTH OF US
BOTH OF US ARE TIRED OF THIS SILLY ACT, SO
WE TAKE A DIFFERENT TACT, ALL I HAVE TO DO IS
MUSTER UP THE STRENGTH
MUSTER UP THE STRENGTH TO TELL HER NO
TELL HER NO, TELL HER THAT YOU HAVE GO, YOU
SHOULD LEAVE, YOU SHOULD LEAVE ON HER ON THE FLOOR
LEAVE A LETTER AT THE DOOR, TELL HER NO
DON'T TAKE HER BACK, DON'T LET HER BACK
JUST TELL HER NO, BREAK HER BACK
BREAK HER BACK, BREAK HER TINY LITTLE BACK
SHE WON'T CALL ME BACK, CALL ME BACK, WHAT IS
SHE GETTING AT, WHEN SHE BITES DOWN ON MY LIP
IS SHE THE SPIDER, IS SHE THE GIANT MOUTH,
I NEED TO CATCH ON FIRE, DOUSE ME IN SOME GAS
LIT A MATCH AND THROW IT ON THE GROUND, I WON'T
MAKE A SOUND, PUT ME IN A CAR AND ROLL ME DOWN
A HILL, LET ME IN THE WATER, JUST A TINY CHILL,
JUST A TINY, TINY CHILL.
SHE CAN WATCH ME BURN, SHE WILL WATCH ME DROWN
AND I WILL LOOK AT HER AS I PLUMMET DOWN
LOOK INTO HER EYES AND SHE WILL LOOK AT MINE
SO SHE CAN SEE AS I FLOAT AWAY, WALK AWAY.
LEAVE HER IN THE NEST, WATCH HER TRY AND FLY
SEE HER HIT THE GROUND, LISTEN TO HER CRY...
WATCH HER TURN AWAY AND PUNCH HER IN THE SPINE
PUNCH HER IN THE BACK, TAKE THE DIFFERENCE BACK.
BUT I TOOK A DIFFERENT TACT AND I TOOK HER BACK
SLEPT TOGETHER IN THE BED THAT WAS WOVEN LIKE A
SPIDER WEB, SLEPT TOGETHER EVERY DAY JUST WAITING
FOR A MOUTH, WAITING FOR THAT GIANT MOUTH TO OPEN
UP AND LET US GO, SPIT ME OUT AND SWALLOW HER,
SWALLOW HER INSIDE IT'S GUT, GO OUR SEPERATE WAYS,
GO OUR SEPERATE WAYS, BUT OUR LOVE IS LIKE A NET
STUCK INSIDE A NET WITH A SORRY LITTLE GIRL.
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Last edited by Something_Vague at Nov 19, 2009,
#4
Very clever. Also very painful to read
I liked it. The turned phrase-type things are very good. I'm assuming the wall of text was intentional?
#5
omg you're still around!

you're still awesome.
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