#1
This set of lyrics were written after I watched Hotel Rwanda around a week ago..

Your thoughts are filled with abhorrence
In your mind, breeds intolerance...
Difference of opinion is not the cause
but something far worse..

Like the moon in a silent night;
Alone, I stand here
In the butchered remains of a massacre
the stench that is inescapable
a sense of dread that is palpable
a moment of thundering silence follows..
a vision so horrible, bestows..
so rotting that even a maggot bemoans..

The sea of corpses covers the wounds of earth
For years we have fought,
only to be distraught
We have bled to death
falling, endlessly into an infinite depth
the inherent joy out of others' sorrows
When do we get out of these deep furrows?
When will we renounce prejudice?

the seeds of hatred sown in your young mind
...insatiable need to grind
race, faith are the reasons
inevitable conflict beckons...

Your thoughts are filled with abhorrence
In your mind, breeds intolerance...
Difference of opinion is not the cause
but something far worse..


It's still a draft and nothing more.. but comments welcome..
Wann kann ich dich von diesem Ort wegbringen?
Wann ist der Tod unser einziger Zuschauer?
Wann können wir schreien anstatt zu flüstern?
Wann ist der neue Anfang das Ende dieses traurigen Madrigals?
Last edited by RAH7747 at Nov 19, 2009,
#2
I get the message you're trying to put out, and it's pretty cool. However, it seems as if you selected a few words, looked it up on a thesaurus, and put in the longest, most difficult word. Even if that wasn't the case, some words seemed out of place (hey that rhymes).

But ever, pretty cool.


And another thing; please edit your thread title to "Unnamed" or something because "As of yet unnamed song" is (I THINK) against the rules for thread titles.
R.I.P. Ronnie James Dio. Supplied amazing music to both me and my mother.

He will be missed.
#3
Hey thanks for the input!

The thing is I didnt actually look up a thesaurus but I have just given my GRE general exam. So these words have been simmering on the surface and I just decided to use them.. he he.. And i noticed that someone changed the title to "untitled" which I have now changed to "unnamed".. sorry for being ignorant..

[edit] I couldn't change the title to "unnamed".. so it stays "untitled"..
Wann kann ich dich von diesem Ort wegbringen?
Wann ist der Tod unser einziger Zuschauer?
Wann können wir schreien anstatt zu flüstern?
Wann ist der neue Anfang das Ende dieses traurigen Madrigals?
Last edited by RAH7747 at Nov 19, 2009,