#3
You need to start practicing scales to work on your pitch better man. Your volume on the track is just fine to me. Your not breathing correctly either, learn to sing from the diaphragm and doing that will help with resonance which will increase the volume of your voice effortlessly.

Get started on these things!
is too young to be versed in such grown up ways...

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