#1
It's in my profile: http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/BlisteringDDj/

It's the first take, and I didn't put a lot of effort into the recording itself. I just recorded it to have an idea of how it would sound.

Give me some feedback on the composition and which elements I could add or remove to make it better! This will of course have vocals (At The Gates-like vocals)! (^_^)

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#2
I thought it got better when there was more contrast between the guitar and drums, it sounded more like Black Sabbath then, it had a good groove to it. I think some kind of soloing would be great for this piece. Also, during the initial really heavy part, changing the drum pattern up would help build the tension before you get to the groovier part.

Care to critique me? : https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1233070
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