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So I wrote this song really fast. I just want to know what you think of the song:

One night I had a beautiful dream
I woke up the next morning
And had forgotten my dream
At least it lasted until the morning
All I can remember is this
In the world there was peace
Just like John imagined
Just like we all dreamed

John dreamed of peace
He imagined a world in peace
And he wasn't the only one
To imagine the world as one
But it was just a dream
Just a long lost dream

I might be just a dreamer
But at least I dont dream for money
I dream to bring peace to everybody
I don't dream for power
Cuz I know peace will come
When what Jimi said will happen
When the power of love
Overcomes the love of power

Jimi dreamed of love
He believed in the power of love
And he wasn't the only one
To imagine the world as one
But it was just a dream
Just a long lost dream

(I dont know if its finished, and Im having trouble with the music )