#1
Hey this is the first song I wrote. My band uses this to open our set tell me what you think. Any advice on song structure would be helpful.
Attachments:
Revenge.zip
#2
Nice. Don't like bars 104, 105, 118 or 119. The sudden stop takes all the energy you've built up completely out of it.
#3
Pretty good, but the riff at bar 18 sounds way to much like one of the riffs in Through Struggle by As I Lay Dying
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