Hey this is the first song I wrote. My band uses this to open our set tell me what you think. Any advice on song structure would be helpful.
Nice. Don't like bars 104, 105, 118 or 119. The sudden stop takes all the energy you've built up completely out of it.
Pretty good, but the riff at bar 18 sounds way to much like one of the riffs in Through Struggle by As I Lay Dying