#1
I uploaded an acoustic instrumental thingy with backing guitar+solo to my profile

probably not worthy of a thread..but I'm still curious so.. any thoughts? :>

I'm a total beginner to writing songs..I'm thinking I could add vocals later but I have no idea how to write lyrics. The thing at the end could maybe be the chorus. Or just the outro. Or another song. As I said, it's my first original. I'm pretty clueless at this stuff.
#2
This is your first original eh? Nicely played here man, your acoustic sounds actually quite nice, and doesn't seem to typical in the sense that the listener can predict where the piece is heading. This would definitely be very good with vocals & if you need help with lyrics or melody i'd be willing to give it (Y)

Crit Mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1233189