Hello my name is Joseph Elliott, I work at a coffee shop and I'm a musician. I tell everybody this.

this was my very first song I wrote, (about a year ago) and i have been recording it for the last week. so here it is...
welcome to the land of Moon Crest....
just for fun, if you want to hear the first recording I did of it...
^thats the old one^

OH and C4C
Last edited by Mr. Wrips at Nov 21, 2009,
Really freaking cool! Loved the intro weirdness, your vocals were perfect. My only complaint is that the drums felt off in timing and also a bit out of place.

The transition was really unexpected, but I thought it was pretty cool. It was smooth.

The transition back, however, felt stranger. I felt like the song should have kept going that way until the end.

I really want to listen to your other songs, but clicking on them doesn't do anything, oh well.

Good work on this.
I like it.
If I could make a suggestion... id change the drumming a little bit, go for something more laid back and loose whatever that tamborine/cowbell/shaker thing is.
Screw Ignorance... Indifference is bliss.
YOUR SAYING LOOSE THE COWBELL!!! meh your right, I'll do it tomorrow, I already spent 5 hours today on this. but I do agree with you so thanks
this is pretty good, love the intro, and i actually like the percussion, though the percussion at the intro seemed a little out of time, but it's not, just seems that way because of the actual pattern. You might need to put them in a little later or something, when your vocals enter. Your vocals seemed very John Lennon influenced (which is a strong compliment by the way) but i'm not sure if i like the way the transition occurred. The transition riff was good though, so it kept me listening nicely. The backing Synth strings(?) were a nice addition, fitted in nicely. Contrary to what the person above said, i actually really liked the transition back, that was nice to finish the way you started. Good Job.

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