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I definitely like it. The lead melody is pretty awesome, and fits very well with the riff.

The distorted chords are pretty muddy, I don't know if that's what you're going for or not though.

I like the drum part, it locks in, but still has that proggy element to it.

The clean break is very well executed, and I like the effect on the guitar there.

The second distorted part is quite good, but it has a muddy, sludge like effect on the guitars.

I think the song overall is very good, and has a large amount of potential.

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