#1
Hey guys, rockish song here. I've been playing around with the words for a while now. C4C, feedback will definantly be appreciated!

Constant pressure,
Under watchful eyes,
Brought back, to the here and now,
Didn’t even try

Lights out! There goes your fantasy,
Black out! On the road to ruin,

Pushing on and on, a struggle within
What will tomorrow bring?

Lying awake,
Eyes still watching him,
Broken promise, no going back,
The bottle’s your best friend

Lights out! There goes your fantasy,
Black out! On the road to ruin,
Lights out! Till then, it was a mystery,
Black out! Dependant no more,

Pushing on and on, a struggle within
What will tomorrow bring?
#2
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the lyrics are damn good .
love to hear this.
Lights out! There goes your fantasy,-this is the most powerful line i believe.
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#3
Thanks man, I'm just being impatient but it means alot to have your post so early after I posted this thread. Ill be sure to check out any of your stuff I find!