Hey, I wrote this over the last few days...this is my first attempt at recording it. Looking for feedback on chord progressions, vocals, and production. c4c fo sho
Good music, but vocals were painful to listen, sorry..
Thanks! Haha sorry, some of the screamy parts were pretty sketchy and I'm still working on the melody towards the end, thats what I get for trying one take wonders!
i like the movement of the bass line man, its really nice. and i dig the trebley tone of your guitar. the jangly chords man they are really catchy. the only thing i didnt like was ur voice in the middle of the song, the screamish part i guess. the transition part in the middle like at 1:35 ish is real good. its a well put together song. crit mine?
the vocals immediately reminded me of tom petty, definetly in a good way (also, nice range). Once they get louder, the way the drums sneakily speed up is pretty cool too. I think you do a pretty good job with the raw part in the middle. You might want to eq the vox with a bit more treble (they sounded a little muffled in the mix, especially the lower pitched parts) and find a better drum program; the pattern is fine but they sound kind of flat. Overall its a really sold song though, nice job.
i liked it. the intro sounded kinda like bob dylan. i hate to say it but i dont think your voice was meant for screaming