#1
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Schmidty8890/ - Shutters

This is the first song I ever wrote, and I did so about a year ago. It's basically a psychadelic breakup song. The second solo was played on a 5-string guitar, because my high E broke, but I had just had to get something down, so consider it a placeholder for now.

Feedback is greatly appreciated, and I'd be happy to look at your work if you provide a link. Let me have it!
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#2
Quote by Schmidty8890
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Schmidty8890/ - Shutters

This is the first song I ever wrote, and I did so about a year ago. It's basically a psychadelic breakup song. The second solo was played on a 5-string guitar, because my high E broke, but I had just had to get something down, so consider it a placeholder for now.

Feedback is greatly appreciated, and I'd be happy to look at your work if you provide a link. Let me have it!

im not sure if id call it phychadelic, but not bad at all. is that a drum track? you said full band but it sounds more like a drum track at times.
#3
That's pretty cool... Great work and awesome sound quality.
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#4
Quote by Blind In 1 Ear
im not sure if id call it phychadelic, but not bad at all. is that a drum track? you said full band but it sounds more like a drum track at times.


It's a drum machine, I set up all the drum patterns you hear. True, though, it's not an actual drum set.
Fender MIA Telecaster with DiMarzio noiseless single coils
-Fulltone OCD
-Ibanez Analog Delay
-Dunlop Crybaby Wah
Fender Blues Junior
Fender MIM Jazz Bass with Noiseless pickups
Mesa Walkabout
Epiphone AC200SCE Acoustic
#5
This reminds me a bit of The Mars Volta (especially the beginning); is that what you meant by "psychedelic" (also Muse)?

Your voice is ultra clear and I diddnt need lyrics to understand you, nice work.

AS far as the mix goes, the levels are really nicely done. I would suggest more high end on the the guitars though, seems like they could be clearer with a bit of treble. Also, during the chorus more distortion would make the chord progression hit harder.

I like the flow of intensity between the verse and chorus and your voice follows it nicely
#6
Very cool song, though I don't really think it's psychedelic. It still was interesting and it had a cool vibe to it. Loved the intro and chords, bass was cool too. Solos are good. I like your singer, he has a nice range. Not perfect though, but good. I liked the structure of the song. Nothing really bad about the song, good work.

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