Good voice, though the guitar playing needs some work. Maybe find someone to play guitar for you, that's what my friend and I do: She sings, I play guitar, and it works out pretty dang well. We're actually in the process of recording this same song, just hard to match up schedules to get it done. I'll post you a link when we're done.

Keep up the practicing!
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