#1
I realized yestermorrow.
this is it.
what I wanted.
I never thought.
that was it
what it takes.
We must move on, progress must continue,
the collective fallsetto of a generation
whittles down the resistance of a nation
and what
was
the
indepen
dant souls
and beings.
One step forward, two steps back,
Am I left?
You must have been the fault,
the hairline
fractured in my mind
of state, considering how fast I grow.
Here I sleep.
Here I lie.
Here I drink, the thoughts of a mind balls deep in itself
never content, stagnant at no point in time.
An obsession with the abcessions far below the process,
the feelings, the motions, none and all.
The wake, the shock before and after
it doesn't happen.
It's been a long night to get away from.
It fails me at this hour.
Sand down
my perfect
execution
to apply
a little.
Im
perfection.
Last edited by CaptinSpalldin at Nov 25, 2009,
#2
"I've heard this expression, my entire life, never realised how peaceful a statement..."
"It's been a long night, away from it all"
"Obsession, Obsessive, Obsessed, Abscessed"
"We must move forward" - I'm reminded of these BTBAM lines.
Especially Swim to the Moon.
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#3
Quote by FFTLxx
"I've heard this expression, my entire life, never realised how peaceful a statement..."
"It's been a long night, away from it all"
"Obsession, Obsessive, Obsessed, Abscessed"
"We must move forward" - I'm reminded of these BTBAM lines.
Especially Swim to the Moon.

Yeah, I'm not much of a lyrics master or anything, this is like a random thought thing, combined with homages to some of my favorite songs from my favorite band haha, good catch :p
#4
These are actually really well written, its just the "Yestermorrow" makes it difficult to take it seriously. It seems like you have a good sense of rythem though. Kinda Tool-esque if you think about it. Let me know if you make any changes.
#5
Quote by Psycho|@_@|
These are actually really well written, its just the "Yestermorrow" makes it difficult to take it seriously. It seems like you have a good sense of rythem though. Kinda Tool-esque if you think about it. Let me know if you make any changes.

Thanks man, I'll keep ya updated.