#1
this is something i started on. try not to pay attention to the drums too much cause im still working on those. tell me what you think so far c4c
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easily broken.gp5
Last edited by justtryme at Nov 24, 2009,
#3
Sounds awesome until bar 11. Didn't like what came after, just sounded kinda boring after the intro which wasn't technical but it had power behind it to me.

Maybe add a chord progression for the piano that follows the guitar.
Last edited by 21Fretter at Nov 24, 2009,
#4
Quote by 21Fretter
Sounds awesome until bar 11. Didn't like what came after, just sounded kinda boring after the intro which wasn't technical but it had power behind it to me.

Maybe add a chord progression for the piano that follows the guitar.


the measures after 11 are where the vocals come in and i had it like that for the bass too lol. i was probably gonna add piano on measures 15 and 16
#6
Quote by frankibo
surely this is supposed to be in 4/4 and not 6/4?


yeah i gotta reformat it. i was just in a hurry to make it when i did